Feedback: Catherine"s

Very nice work Catherine. I prefer the version Daytime. The one at magic moment  needs to be modified even more due to the less lighting condition, Ex:  darker  for those horses in distance, the row of tree too, darker, less detail, same for the grass., figure...
The rendering of the horse and armor is good but need a little adjustment , I fined tune the horse for more dimension and readjusted some anatomy details. The grass is maybe to perfect, too nice cut.
The metal of the armor should take some blue colour of sky, you don't need much reflection on it , it may compete with the figure. The leg darker showing  it's bending inward to wrap around the horse body.
Cheers

Here's another version

I have worked with the  colors from a "golden hour" sunset for more drama...

Tell me what you think

Derniers commentaires

Hi Charles,

Here is what I did for the vernissage, I would like to have your last advices and comments on my piece.

Thank you!

Feedback-Corey James

Horse heads

Working on several pieces for the vernissage.

Tear them apart.

Composition

horse (Anna)

Horse

horse simplified

first exercice... sorry it's late

Military comp

warm/ cool light study 2 (unfinished)

warm light exercice Mathieu

Corey-James Weber - Military themed 2-tone lighting study

Here are my studies of the military themed study

warm / cool light study 1

Warm / Cool light and material study

Feedback of your exercices

Hello everyone, the goal and  the challenge of this exercise are splitting the mass of a uniform value of one colour into different colours while keeping the same value of the initial mass.